{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"25319831","dateCreated":"1277122513","smartDate":"Jun 21, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"smohr00","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/smohr00","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1299582830\/smohr00-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/wikidlg1.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/25319831"},"dateDigested":1531976561,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Coffee the dog","description":"Story is showing a lot of potential LiZa, really need to focus on your punctuation and maintaining your tense, is the story happening as you relate it or are you recounting these events? present vs past. Good use of character voice and I like the way you're making use of short and complex sentences to set the pacing. Well Done. Just watch those errors, this reads more like a first draft than a published piece. Check your editing.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}